How's My Driving?

This is a character journal for Reever Wenhamm of D. Gray-man, however because he does not belong to me, inevitably I am going to mess up somewhere in writing him. Please leave me your constructive criticism, complaints, ideas, or tell me what you liked about my playing him and how I can improve.

Anonymous commenting is on, and IP logging should be off if I did it right! Thanks for your help!